Thursday, January 7, 2010

Tonight

Four kids
finally asleep.
Laundry is folded.
Dishes being washed.

The house is dark and silent.

I sip a small cup of visne
and nibble two vines
of black licorice
before bed.

*Visne is a sour cherry drink from Turkey.

5 comments:

Jessica said...

where did you find visne?

This has got to be one of my favorite poems.

I think it sounds like a dream right before you drift off into dream land.

I'm just not creative enough to reply in poetic form...please read this with feeling and add a few rhyming words.

Jenny said...

Lovely! I hope you're keeping all your poems together so you create a book someday.

Michelle said...

Not to burst your bubble...but, isn't licorice a sweet?

Ashley said...

I love this short poem.

Mariann Zaugg Wise said...

Uh, if I remember right, last time you gave me visne to try, I was drunk within 20 minutes. It's nothing but fermented.... stuff.